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It can be anything from getting hired by a specific company to holding a particular position. It can also span out five, 10 and 20 years from now. To illustrate, your first goal might be for an entry-level position at your dream company.

However, 10 years from then, you might want to have a management position. Then, 20 years from now, you might like to work as a C-level executive. So, if these are your goals. You want to explain each one, in detail. How do you plan to get hired at the entry-level? How do you plan on moving up into management?

How do you intend to acquire a C-level position? All of these goals need research above and beyond some assumptions. For example, you could say you will work really hard to get into management.

Nonetheless, is that specific enough? For the most part, no it is not. What do you mean when you say you will work really hard? There is a difference between working hard and working smart. You could lift heavy boxes all day. That is back breaking work, but will it get you into management? So, you need to put your steps into detail. For instance, you can say you will strive for perfect attendance, take and complete offered train, work with mentors, ask for advice and follow the company guidelines for moving forward with your career.

The same thing goes for the entry-level position. Instead of saying, you will obtain an interview, describe exactly what you would do to get that first interview. Moreover, detail all of the ways you will prepare to excel at your interview, as well. Think about it, do you understand the presence you exude? If not, you should check out this course on creating a watt presence.

Your essay needs to start with an introductory paragraph, a body and a conclusion. It is the start, a middle and the finish. Essentially, you want to begin with a background for why you have the goals you have. Think of your audience. Do they know you or not? If you have never met, then you have to be extremely descriptive with your introductory paragraph. You only have a few sentences to make a good and lasting impression.

Be careful with every word, and set aside time for revisions as they come. For the body, this is where you put the meat, so to speak. This is where you speak directly to your goals and how you plan to achieve them. Give concrete examples of your goals and what you think you need to do to get there.

Even if some of your logic is flawed or inexperienced, passion is what counts the most. Many times, there is no direct and sure way to reach our goals. They might even come to us when we least expect them to.

The conclusion should be a simple review of your introduction and body. Reiterate why you have these goals and what makes them important to you. You want to be professional, but it helps to add some emotion. Using emotional phrases helps us connect with others, and that is really what matters the most. My fascination with business, direct interaction with clients, strategic overview, and the view of a company as provider of products that meet customer needs has motivated me to move from technical roles to business positions.

While today I use intuition and experience to guide my activity, I plan to strengthen my skills by learning formal methodologies at Tuck and benefiting from personal experiences of classmates and faculty. I feel that such knowledge will help me do my job effectively and achieve my long term objectives. In future positions I will be faced daily with situations which require interpersonal skills: While there is sometimes a suggested textbook solution to these situations, great skill is required to adapt the general solution to the particular case.

I will need to understand the activities of these departments, best practices for interacting with them and how to take them into account in decision-making. I learned that an important part of being a manager is developing vision, knowing not only what your business unit is doing next month but also what you think it should do three years from now. The job requires developing a road-map and setting milestones that will lead to long-term objective while keeping short-term goals in mind.

I feel that Tuck is the place to receive my MBA education. The close community, the unique geographical location and the strong emphasis the MBA program has on team players and teamwork creates a special atmosphere.

I feel most comfortable learning and exchanging ideas in this type of environment. Its informality allows me to easily open up and express my opinion or risk making a mistake. This special trait reflects also in the Tuck alumni community. Talking to Tuck students and Alumni, I was impressed with their willingness to go to great length to assist each other.

I plan to take advantage of the fact that Tuck is part of Dartmouth University. The opportunity to enrich my education through classes in Physics, Psychology or History is something I look forward to as I feel this would allow me to develop a multi-disciplinary creative approach that will provide be with a better framework to achieve my goals. Describe your vision for your career and your inspiration for pursuing this career path. The following essay was submitted to the Duke MBA program by our client.

It was on this deployment that I understood, and saw first hand, the amount of wealth our nation was sending to the Middle East in an effort to satisfy our oil-based energy needs. From the coast of Kuwait to the streets of Baghdad, there were several realizations that motivated me to make a considerable effort in the future to better understand energy, how it is developed and used, and how we could begin to move away from foreign oil.

For example, any person traveling a main thoroughfare in and around Baghdad could purchase, from a dealer or small supply stack distributor on the side of the street, enough unleaded fuel to fill up their vehicle for the equivalent of what was one dollar.

The pictures they painted, of numerous building cranes at work and ongoing construction projects, were of local economies in little need of financial assistance.

Why should we be sending this wealth only to oil-export nations? Therefore, upon leaving the military in , I joined an energy company, which was the number two overall producer of natural gas in the U.

Over recent years, the U. However, our commitment as a global partner to advance the use of cleaner energy is not yet sufficient, and our national energy focus remains on foreign oil, rather than other available, feasible energy sources.

I hope to influence this change by joining the collaborative and innovative MBA culture at Fuqua, where I can begin this new journey of becoming a future leader of energy focus on a global scale. In the short term, I hope to become a Finance Associate at an alternative-based energy company, such as Schott Solar, Inc, or in alternative energy division at a larger company, such as Chevron.

I could even return to my company in the Finance group, because I want to join a company that is devoted to truly developing an alternative to cleaner, non-oil based energy sources.

In my new position, I plan to gain perspective on the economic objectives and scope of applying our alternative energy options. I will need the understanding of these operational fundamentals in order to comprehend how to take the first steps to improve the company in areas that could affect our financial outlook.

There will be much to learn from not only the financial side of whatever company I join, but also the actual energy focus of the company and how it intends to implement its energy plan in the near future. Hopefully, I will be able to contribute to the future successful marketability and sustainability of our alternative energy in an efficient and timely manner.

In the long term, I hope to move up within the organization I join and effect change on a larger scale as the VP of Energy Development. This position should provide me the opportunities to continue to not only push our group to find, evaluate, and pursue an economically-viable energy source, but to influence other energy companies to take a look at an alternative to oil-based energy sources. Additionally, I would focus on communicating with government officials in the energy policy arena about our products and their applications in order to garner more support for these alternative energy sources.

This continued communication effort would allow for our company to prove how our energy source could be applied in an economically and environmentally friendly manner. Initially, these efforts will take time, but after several years of operating in this Energy Development position, our team will be able take even more risks in finding feasible applications for our alternative energy products.

Our development team will also work with different industries and sectors where we think our energy application best suits their business. For example, our blended fuel or more powerful solar panel may be better suited to large-haul trucks as opposed to passenger vehicles, so we would move our efforts to work with companies such as JB Hunt Trucking or ABF Freight to focus on improving their fuel usage plan.

Hopefully, these efforts will gain enough momentum that our proved alternative energy source, combined with a practical application, could allow other third-party companies to truly understand the economic and environmental advantages to using non-oil based energy sources. Eventually, I hope to be in a position of impact that will enable us to employ our tested and refined source on a larger scale. My ultimate vision in this pursuit is to keep funds that would otherwise be used to import oil to be used to improve our national economic position with respect to energy dependence.

It will only be through this comprehensive and collaborative effort across varied companies that we can achieve our goal of finding applications where alternative energy sources will replace foreign oil. Once we have gained another foothold in improving the economics of our future energy needs, in a more environmentally-approachable fashion, we can begin pursuing international partners in this effort to help prepare other nations that are looking for an alternative to an oil-based energy policy.

The medical technology world has always fascinated me. Thus, I believe medical technologies will be an exciting area of growth in the world economy in the years to come. My goal is to lead an energetic and ambitious sales team, in an ambiguous setting, towards yet untapped markets and regions. From INSEAD I look to gain a unique multi-cultural learning experience, interacting with people of all backgrounds, absorbing their insights, sharing mine, in and outside the class and to learn how to do business with them.

I expect to gain a behind the scenes look into international companies and analyze their strategic and operational moves, meeting the company leaders in person. In addition, I would like to earn tools to perform professional strategic analyses and thereby practice these tools in an intellectually engaging class, improving them throughout the degree, I look forward to take courses from world renown strategy professors such as W.

Chan Kim and Phil Parker. I heard a lot about Pierre Chandon, Phillip Anderson, and Ziv Carmon and their marketing management, Venture capital and private equity and consumer psychology courses, which will enrich me with official marketing knowledge, crucial to my career path towards global sales and will enable me to re-evaluate my own experiences.

He believed that the market in my country is limited and that had he acquired a business education in an international school from INSEAD, as did his friend and today my mentor Mr. Igor Landau, his career could have reached new and exciting heights. Please describe your career progress since you last applied and ways in which you have enhanced your candidacy.

Include updates on short-term and long-term career goals, as well as your continued interest in UCLA Anderson. In the long run, my ultimate goal is to co-found a company in the field of new media devices. My short term goal is to seek a US-based position as Business Development Manager in a company such as Sony or Apple in a business group with a technological orientation in New Media or Mobile Devices.

I look forward to leading the entrepreneurial initiatives and innovation such a position requires. Here I would be responsible for locating undeveloped market areas, and creating innovative business models for new products. My plan is to stay with this company for years, fulfilling at least one other position in another business group, as I would like to broaden my knowledge of the markets more quickly in order to move on to pursue my own entrepreneurial venture.

Eventually, I hope to return to the high tech industry in my country and work to found my own company. Since then I have worked as a software engineer in two leading International companies to solidify the technological foundation necessary to support my goals.

I know that if I relied solely on my Engineering training I would probably be able to advance to project and even product management, but I will need an MBA if I am to advance to highest management positions, eventually starting my own venture. One of the biggest attractions of Anderson is the Applied Managerial Research Program, which is unique in its breadth and extent.

This level of real world training would provide an opportunity to meet with industry leaders that can help launch my career, and gain experience in the operational workings of a large US company while still in school. I believe this experience will offer me a serious edge over graduates of other programs who will not have this training when seeking my first job after graduation.

I am excited to see how the required electives for the Engineering and Technology Management Career path address the exact skills of technology and project management and product development I will need for my post MBA positions. The unique opportunity to consult entrepreneurial firms for six month, and the amount of extra-curricular activities if offers, which is unparalleled to any other center in any other program, make me sure that I could gain skills and knowledge of new venture management that I know I will need in order to eventually start my own company.

It would assure that in the future I could consult and cooperate with people with similar goals who are more likely to have direct experience in areas that I will be working in myself. Finally, I am eager to be a part of a program that emphasizes creating a supportive open community. I know myself to make friends quickly and working in cooperative environments has always made me achieve the best results. I spoke to MBA Arik Waldman, who assured me that at Anderson team play really shines both in and outside of the classroom, which I connect with as a core value in my own life and which I know will support my professional skills and assure a high quality social experience.

Amongst the activities offered by the Anderson Student Association, I will naturally join the Entrepreneur Association, but I am also looking forward to joining the Anderson Public Speaking Club as I was a passionate debater during my undergraduate degree. Also, I am excited about the opportunity to finally learn to surf. What are your short term and long term goals? How will a Tepper MBA help you achieve these goals? Please include any information regarding what steps you have taken to learn more about Tepper.

The following essay was submitted to the Tepper MBA program by our client. After graduating, I plan to pick up right where I left off as an entrepreneur in the software industry. My short-term career goal is to return to working full-time as CEO of the software start-up company I founded, which is a developing start-up company with a revolutionary concept aimed at changing product information consumption on the web.

I plan to establish an American office for the company, which will serve as a marketing platform for broadening our customer base in the US. In the long run, I plan to lead my company to becoming a large public-held industry leader. I am pursuing a formal business education in order to complete my background with the necessary knowledge and tools to lead an innovative technological company to success.

When first researching MBA programs to find the optimal program for me, the 3 things that were most important to me were finding a top school, a program with good entrepreneurship and technology related courses and a small and intimate program. Annie Dolan, who introduced me to Carnegie Mellon. Due to the innovative and flexible nature of the Tepper MBA program and the available electives at Tepper and other top ranked schools at Carnegie Mellon, I feel that I will be able to assemble the most effective course selection for my goals.

I went on a campus tour and had lunch with students. Dolan on my interview, I was happy to discover that my preliminary impression of Tepper was actually quite accurate. From talking to professors, students and graduates, I believe that Tepper fits these criteria perfectly, which is why I hope to become a member of class of and a part of the Tepper community.

Joe was left with bragging rights only; the story painfully demonstrates how much is on the line when it comes to energy financing. Those firms are hands-on participants in clean energy assimilation, and positioned to advocate regulatory changes.

That will be my first step towards achieving my ultimate goal — to lead a vehicle dedicated solely to investments in renewable energy projects. This program taught more than just social environmental theory. My conviction that sustainability and business development are intrinsically contradictory was inverted, however, when I joined Veolia Environment.

The Decision Brief method, invented at Columbia by Dean Hubbard, will be the ideal tool for me to hone such problem solving skills, and redirect them from my previous experience in the military and as a lawyer. The opportunity to study with professors such as Bruce Greenwald, a leading authority on Value Investing, will complement those skills with a deeper understanding of investing considerations, another gap of mine.

I intend to take full advantage of the opportunity through a club membership. I cannot wait to learn and be challenged daily by the best and brightest from around the world at Columbia, as I prepare, personally and professionally, to jump into this developing world. This translates to 9 foundations for a strong career plan: Specific industry Specific enough to make it unique and concrete. The key to the Career Essay: Connect most sentences with the future career goals and the industry name.

Most of the sentences should relate to the career goals. What are the short and long term career goals? If the first step is assured — a VERY clear statement of this fact. Because some admission readers may skim the essays, you want to make sure this paragraph is very noticeable make it a separate paragraph , and to mention it twice if possible.

Nice, but not necessary, to have: Repeated mention of the exact same industry name. Why are these your goals why do you feel they are the right goals for you? Why these goals of all possible goals in the world?

Should be personal, deep. Any other details that a. It needs to be clear how these details are connected to explaining your career goals. Usually not OK to have: What are your career aspirations and why? How will you get there? The following essay was submitted to the Harvard MBA program by our client.

Long Run Objective My long-run objective is to achieve a senior managerial position in a large multinational corporation that markets, or preferably manufactures, commodities. Short Run Objectives Looking ten years back, I view my interdisciplinary experience in business management, army service, political and public positions, and traveling as a part of the solid background that can generate a successful senior manager in a multinational commodities corporation.

To complete my preparation process, my short-run objectives are: Second — to develop within the scope of one firm.


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